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Aldranea II
« Thread Started on Apr 5, 2007, 1:45pm »

I finally got this machinima movie put together. Thanks to everyone here that auditioned for the parts.

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(Science Fiction, 9:53)

Daran Foster- me
Killshot the Mercenary- BobCat
Gustav Bennet - CameronFrye
Danny Bennet - Shard-Spider
Sven - ShockDingo
Anea Tan - April Smith (Aibrean, VAA)
Sarah Jones - Pam Larson (QueenDuranie, VAA)

I know it could have turned out a lot better, and feel free to tear it to shreds if you think it deserves it.

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Re: Aldranea II
« Reply #1 on Apr 5, 2007, 5:07pm »

I liked it. Some of the sound was a little quiet, but I thought the plot was pretty good, especially for a the Movies Movie.

Also, whoever played Killshot the Mercenary deserves an award of some sort. He sounds intelligent and sexy.

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Re: Aldranea II
« Reply #2 on Apr 5, 2007, 6:23pm »

Isn't he humble, folks?

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Re: Aldranea II
« Reply #3 on Apr 6, 2007, 11:53am »

Nice job on this, I was entertained

Here's some of my thoughts

-Nice intro, it might had added a bit of a brighter spark if there was narration added to the begining
-A few lines were slightly quiet
-Screams during martial arts fight scene were a little off
-Some music/ambience during some of the scenes could have added to the feeling

Overall pretty nice, hopefully the movies will make a patch to eliminate some of the unneeded and comical movesments for standing still hehe. Good work dude, I was happy to be part of this.

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Re: Aldranea II
« Reply #4 on Apr 7, 2007, 3:52am »

Wow.. nice machinima... Its true that in "The Movies" the motions are overdone, but still
this is probably the best machinima I've seen so far. The plot was a little tough to follow,
it felt like a middle episode rather than a first episode, but it was still pretty cool, and pretty unique (chicken in the rafters!!) Is there a first one??...

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Ok checked out the first episode, Nice job, it'd be totally worth redoing this and getting some VA's to replace the built in blah-blah jibba-jabba talk of "The Movies".. I liked the plot of the first on better..

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Re: Aldranea II
« Reply #5 on Apr 7, 2007, 1:14pm »

Thanks. ^_^ The second one is definitely a 'middle' chapter, hence the II in the title and the lack of full closure in the ending. I origianlly made like four of them, but they got progressively stupider, so I shelved them all and started over.

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