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|  | The mere fair heart. (now with noir tribute)
« Thread Started on Oct 13, 2008, 4:10pm » | |
Shaking off the rust... again... guess its been a while...
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Cast away, filled with desire
Pages of words,
into the burning pyre
Lost in the rain
Salvaged to remember
The fair beating of a heart,
unspoken
reaching out for the hand,
unbroken
Long gone are the days
Filled with passion
And decay
United, the eyes avert
Seeing simply what they seek
For ever finding treasure
But never what they need.
Cast away, into the fire
Pages of words,
and of denial.
Lost in the flame.
Salvaged to remember
The mere beating of the heart,
unending
Pounding for the night,
unrelenting
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| | Re: The mere fair heart.
« Reply #1 on Oct 14, 2008, 4:51pm » | |
This is really beautiful. :] Nicely done.
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| | Re: The mere fair heart.
« Reply #2 on Oct 14, 2008, 4:53pm » | |
You still got it Rigor ^_^
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| | Re: The mere fair heart.
« Reply #3 on Oct 15, 2008, 4:30am » | |
phew! thanks for the comments guys!
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| | Re: The mere fair heart.
« Reply #5 on Nov 5, 2008, 5:36am » | |
The heart patterned snake.
Gently I drift, driftwood amongst the waves
slowly floating,
across the endless lake
upon the high tide
laced with sorrow
i wait, adrift
for there's no tomorrow
Gentle slither, through the puddle
finding prey,
where she should find trouble
puddle erupts into the endless lake
onwards slithers the body
of a heart patterned snake.
a driftwood she did see, and the hunt
it had begun
Constricting yet again
as she had done with everyone
This time yet it seems
that it was ment to be
that they'd be bound together
untill the lake became the sea.
Warmly intertwined
drifting forward endlessly
forever caught in time
for everyone to see
the driftwood, which is I
and she who is the snake
together up in heaven
untill the sea returns to lake.
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| | Re: The mere fair heart.
« Reply #6 on Nov 5, 2008, 1:49pm » | |
Nov 5, 2008, 5:36am, Rigor wrote:The heart patterned snake.
Gently I drift, driftwood amongst the waves
slowly floating,
across the endless lake
upon the high tide
laced with sorrow
i wait, adrift
for there's no tomorrow
Gentle slither, through the puddle
finding prey,
where she should find trouble
puddle erupts into the endless lake
onwards slithers the body
of a heart patterned snake.
a driftwood she did see, and the hunt
it had begun
Constricting yet again
as she had done with everyone
This time yet it seems
that it was ment to be
that they'd be bound together
untill the lake became the sea.
Warmly intertwined
drifting forward endlessly
forever caught in time
for everyone to see
the driftwood, which is I
and she who is the snake
together up in heaven
untill the sea returns to lake. |
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That one is REALLY good. I mean REAAAAALLLLYYYYYYYY good
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| | Re: The mere fair heart.
« Reply #7 on Nov 5, 2008, 5:09pm » | |
thank you honey... much appreciated 
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| | Re: The mere fair heart.
« Reply #8 on Nov 6, 2008, 2:38am » | |
Huh, what an enjoyable little ditty! Such a cool poem story. Was this a free write or did you have it written down somewhere prior to this?
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« Reply #10 on Nov 6, 2008, 3:50am » | |
haha true, but these have nothing to do with the pirates XD
these are partially free written and partially prior writing. i had the general line set, just the words that had to be filled in nicely...
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| | Re: The mere fair heart.
« Reply #11 on Nov 6, 2008, 4:55am » | |
Cool, well cant wait to see more...ill keep my...erm...eyes peeled? Yeah that painful action there...
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« Reply #12 on Jan 13, 2009, 11:53am » | |
Kingdom-Queendom
Upon his throne
there sat the king
Mighty in his golden hall
His face a smile
that made all grin
It was the peace, before the fall
In the night
when king lay to rest
The knight he loved more than a son
Walked up to
the mighty king
The new age had begun!
In war and death
the kingdom plunged
Ripped apart, under knight-son's wish
Forever to be scarred
and broken
shattered as a porcelain dish
For years that came
the fight raged on
And Knight-son had grown tired of war
And slowly
dawning in his mind
grew the longing to the age before
It was too late
And so knight-son died
In this war-torn world he came to rest
Stabbed in the heart
By the one he loved
of his many concubines, the best
Yet again
A new age grew
In the hands of the new found queen
With peace restored
but land still scarred
War wasn't easy to redeem
Hard she worked
to restore her fathers land
Untill at long last the work was done
And her father
-then the smiling king-
Could have been proud of what she had become
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| | Re: The mere fair heart.
« Reply #13 on Jan 16, 2009, 6:00pm » | |
double post needed dedicated to iamnoir: legend among legends
Laters yo!
here you left me
all alone
Standing by the streetlight
clinging to my phone
Hoping you would call me
Speak to me at night
Come back to where we should be
all should be allright
the child within is crying.
while here i stand in pain
to not have seen you leaving
leaves with my shame
One day you will return
I hope that I'll be there to greet
you once you're back on track
And there's solid ground beneath your feet
Goodbye my cable lover
goodbye my nettest friend
i'll wait here till it's over
i'll wait untill the end!
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